Here's the picture we're supposed to use to write a 25 word start to a story:
Le Sigh--I wrote 35 words, but while too long for the contest, it's too good not to share:
You'd think I'd get used to this—it happens a few times a
month. Sometimes a man. Sometimes a woman. It’s worst when it’s a kid.
Why can’t people get to the airport on time?
Back to the drawing board...
This is what I've turned in at exactly 25 words:
Did she leave him? Or did
he turn down the job?
I sigh and call up
the next person in line. “Upgrade to first class?”
Haha. I just NOW (after submitting) read the comments section. Whoops--apparently the entry is supposed to be one sentence long. Hmm...just for kicks, I'll try to convey the same sentiment I want in a single sentence:
Day after day, it’s never a surprise as anonymous people stand
before that window, watching their past or future leave the tarmac.
While I'm kind of liking the finality of the last option, I think the second is the best for leading into an actual story. But then, I'm biased since that's the one I've submitted.
Oh goody! I just read a comment where someone wrote too much--I can re-submit!
Oh goody! I just read a comment where someone wrote too much--I can re-submit!
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